trace2 docs: a couple of grammar fixes
Signed-off-by: Johannes Schindelin <johannes.schindelin@gmx.de> Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Johannes Schindelin committed
May 3, 2022 at 10:26 UTC
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Trace2 is controlled using `trace2.*` config values in the system and
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global config files and `GIT_TRACE2*` environment variables. Trace2 does
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-not read from repo local or worktree config files or respect `-c`
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-command line config settings.
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+not read from repo local or worktree config files, nor does it respect
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+`-c` command line config settings.
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== Trace2 Targets
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@@ -34,8 +34,8 @@ Format details are given in a later section.
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=== The Normal Format Target
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-The normal format target is a tradition printf format and similar
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-to GIT_TRACE format. This format is enabled with the `GIT_TRACE2`
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+The normal format target is a traditional printf format and similar
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+to the GIT_TRACE format. This format is enabled with the `GIT_TRACE2`
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environment variable or the `trace2.normalTarget` system or global
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config setting.
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@@ -635,7 +635,7 @@ process may be a shell script which doesn't have a session-id.)
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This event is generated after the child is started in the background
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and given a little time to boot up and start working. If the child
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-startups normally and while the parent is still waiting, the "ready"
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+starts up normally while the parent is still waiting, the "ready"
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field will have the value "ready".
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If the child is too slow to start and the parent times out, the field
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will have the value "timeout".
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Regions::
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- Regions can be use to time an interesting section of code.
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+ Regions can be used to time an interesting section of code.
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void wt_status_collect(struct wt_status *s)
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Thread messages added to a thread-proc.
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-For example, the multithreaded preload-index code can be
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+For example, the multi-threaded preload-index code can be
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instrumented with a region around the thread pool and then
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-per-thread start and exit events within the threadproc.
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+per-thread start and exit events within the thread-proc.
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static void *preload_thread(void *_data)