RelNotes: minor wording fixes in 2.43.0 release notes

Signed-off-by: Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com> Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>

Elijah Newren committed Nov 11, 2023 at 04:02 UTC e0939bec273052b1a8d69db4a3f7c87aaf83e220
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Documentation/RelNotes/2.43.0.txt
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@@ -27,14 +27,14 @@ UI, Workflows & Features
27 a branch that is checked out and protect it. Rephrase the message
28 to say that the branch is in use.
29
30 - * Hourly and other schedule of "git maintenance" jobs are randomly
30 + * Hourly and other schedules of "git maintenance" jobs are randomly
31 distributed now.
32
33 * "git cmd -h" learned to signal which options can be negated by
34 listing such options like "--[no-]opt".
35
36 - * The way authentication related data other than passwords (e.g.
37 - oath token and password expiration data) are stored in libsecret
36 + * The way authentication related data other than passwords (e.g.,
37 + oauth token and password expiration data) are stored in libsecret
38 keyrings has been rethought.
39
40 * Update the libsecret and wincred credential helpers to correctly
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ UI, Workflows & Features
60
61 * The default log message created by "git revert", when reverting a
62 commit that records a revert, has been tweaked, to encourage people
63 - describe complex "revert of revert of revert" situation better in
63 + to describe complex "revert of revert of revert" situations better in
64 their own words.
65
66 * The command-line completion support (in contrib/) learned to
@@ -77,8 +77,8 @@ UI, Workflows & Features
77
78 * The command line completion script (in contrib/) can be told to
79 complete aliases by including ": git <cmd> ;" in the alias to tell
80 - it that the alias should be completed similar to how "git <cmd>" is
81 - completed. The parsing code for the alias as been loosened to
80 + it that the alias should be completed in a similar way to how "git <cmd>" is
81 + completed. The parsing code for the alias has been loosened to
82 allow ';' without an extra space before it.
83
84 * "git for-each-ref" and friends learned to apply mailmap to
@@ -117,8 +117,8 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
117 * Flaky "git p4" tests, as well as "git svn" tests, are now skipped
118 in the (rather expensive) sanitizer CI job.
119
120 - * Tests with LSan from time to time seem to emit harmless message
121 - that makes our tests unnecessarily flaky; we work it around by
120 + * Tests with LSan from time to time seem to emit harmless messages
121 + that make our tests unnecessarily flaky; we work around it by
122 filtering the uninteresting output.
123
124 * Unused parameters to functions are marked as such, and/or removed,
@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
135
136 * Test coverage for trailers has been improved.
137
138 - * The code to iterate over loose references have been optimized to
138 + * The code to iterate over loose references has been optimized to
139 reduce the number of lstat() system calls.
140
141 * The codepaths that read "chunk" formatted files have been corrected
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ Fixes since v2.42
157 branch tips at the same time will not waste building and testing
158 the same thing twice.
159
160 - * The commit-graph verification code that detects mixture of zero and
160 + * The commit-graph verification code that detects a mixture of zero and
161 non-zero generation numbers has been updated.
162
163 * "git diff -w --exit-code" with various options did not work
@@ -170,20 +170,20 @@ Fixes since v2.42
170 the sequencer code has been cleaned up for consistency.
171
172 * "git diff --no-such-option" and other corner cases around the exit
173 - status of the "diff" command has been corrected.
173 + status of the "diff" command have been corrected.
174
175 * "git for-each-ref --sort='contents:size'" sorts the refs according
176 to size numerically, giving a ref that points at a blob twelve-byte
177 (12) long before showing a blob hundred-byte (100) long.
178
179 - * We now limit depth of the tree objects and maximum length of
179 + * We now limit the depth of the tree objects and maximum length of
180 pathnames recorded in tree objects.
181 (merge 4d5693ba05 jk/tree-name-and-depth-limit later to maint).
182
183 * Various fixes to the behavior of "rebase -i" when the command got
184 interrupted by conflicting changes.
185
186 - * References from description of the `--patch` option in various
186 + * References from a description of the `--patch` option in various
187 manual pages have been simplified and improved.
188
189 * "git grep -e A --no-or -e B" is accepted, even though the negation
@@ -203,8 +203,8 @@ Fixes since v2.42
203 information for a file when fsmonitor knows it is clean and ended
204 up behaving as if it is not clean, which has been corrected.
205
206 - * Clarify how "alias.foo = : git cmd ; aliased-command-string" should
207 - be spelled with necessary whitespaces around punctuation marks to
206 + * Clarify how "alias.foo = : git cmd ; aliased-command-string" should be
207 + spelled with necessary whitespace around punctuation marks to
208 work.
209
210 * HTTP Header redaction code has been adjusted for a newer version of
@@ -256,9 +256,9 @@ Fixes since v2.42
256 by "git stash create" now errors out.
257 (merge d9b6634589 jc/fail-stash-to-store-non-stash later to maint).
258
259 - * The index file has room only for lower 32-bit of the file size in
259 + * The index file has room only for the lower 32-bit of the file size in
260 the cached stat information, which means cached stat information
261 - will have 0 in its sd_size member for a file whose size is multiple
261 + will have 0 in its sd_size member for a file whose size is a multiple
262 of 4GiB. This is mistaken for a racily clean path. Avoid it by
263 storing a bogus sd_size value instead for such files.
264 (merge 5143ac07b1 bc/racy-4gb-files later to maint).
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ Fixes since v2.42
281 20 months or so, which has been corrected.
282
283 * "git send-email" did not have certain pieces of data computed yet
284 - when it tried to validate the outging messages and its recipient
284 + when it tried to validate the outgoing messages and its recipient
285 addresses, which has been sorted out.
286
287 * "git bugreport" learned to complain when it received a command line